FIC: Can't Take a Joke?

[tsukiwriter]

Okay, so this fic has been in my head for awhile and was inspired by talk at

Comments

[janegray]

Awesome. Thank you for writing it :D

I really liked it, it was both funny and hot.

My only criticism is that there are a few mistakes, like "her pulled down her panties" and "watching the Gotham".

[tsukiwriter]

*headdesk* That's what I get for posting in a rush. Will edit for grammar before the days ends-- thanks!

And glad you liked despite the errors! ;) It was an *odd* idea, but the madness gripped me and wouldn't let me go! I'm glad it seemed to work.

- T

[chameleongirl79]

I actually likes the 'watched the Gotham' typo :)
It seemed to fit . Nice fic :D

[tsukiwriter]

AH! too late-- already fixed! ;P

But I'm glad the typo (and the fic) worked for you, haha!

[meomaow]

EEeeeh! YES! Thank you. That's totally what happened in-between the Countdowns. I'm going to print this out and stick it on top of the pages.

Also, this was awesome and for the win and I did not make embarrassing noises all the way through it. Not at all. You can't prove iiiit.

Jason chuckled as he ripped open the foil. “You’re bossy, clowny.”

“Yeah, well, you need to be bossed, dead boy.”

NNnnn. Those two need to have a team-up like, yesterday.
(Jason: Oooh, I think she "teamed" my "up" quite enough... *wink wink, nudge nudge*)

[tsukiwriter]

HAHAHA-- glad you liked, especially enough to NOT make weird noises! ;)

Yes, let's hope for a canon team-up ASAP.

Many smiles,
T

[saavikam77]

Gaaahh!! XD Oh, gods. Best. Crack. EVER!!

I can totally see Harley getting off on Jason's growly voice, and Jay just not able to help himself at that point. :p

Loved the way she got him to actually laugh at the end. But damn, the fake crowbar was a mean trick! O_o *hugs Jay and passes him a Xanax*.

*applauds* ^_^

[axolotl_lan]

You wrote it... squee! This leaves me all sorts of happy especially since that was what I took to be the obvious conclusion *i.e. that Harley and holly are now his biatches... and this I think I like it better because while there is certainly some power-play going on I don't think either one fully dominated which is good.. and semi-healthy.. for them... I suppose*

The porn is wonderfully executed and I look forward to the crowbarless sequel what you thought you'd get out of it this easily?

[shiny_glor_chan]

*whistles* Maaan, so amusing! Nice work.