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Jacob/Edward - Conceding Defeat - Oneshot

Dec 12, 2009 22:33

Title: Conceding Defeat
Author: tsumetaikaze
Pairing: Jacob/Edward
Genre: Romance, Humour, Nonsense XD
Rating: PG-13/T
Warnings: None.
Summary: “Edward, this is my unbearably gay best friend, Jacob, and he fixes cars. Jacob, this is my know-it-all biology partner, and he’s not interested.”
Disclaimer: HAH! Nice one. No.
Notes: I finally did it. I gave ( Read more... )

!fanfiction, fandom: twilight, pairing: jacob/edward

Comments 37

usmc75 December 12 2009, 12:01:31 UTC

Very cute. I'd fall for Jake in a second.

tsumetaikaze December 12 2009, 12:10:17 UTC

XD Me too.
Thanks for comenting! <3

_profiterole_ December 12 2009, 14:57:17 UTC

That was fun and adorable! ^__^

tsumetaikaze December 13 2009, 00:26:01 UTC

Thanks! <3

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tsumetaikaze December 13 2009, 00:26:47 UTC

XD
Thanks heaps! <3

pretty_panther December 12 2009, 15:36:41 UTC

I love it. Each section works so well with the next and I love your Jake. He is just perfect.:)

Brilliant work for sure:)

tsumetaikaze December 13 2009, 00:16:32 UTC

Thanks so much! <333
I had to reread it about 12 times to make sure the sections did actually work, so it's nice to know it turned out well XD

wirrrn December 12 2009, 17:01:19 UTC

Hee! This was ace. Lovely humour, and angst-free romance made a nice change for once!

tsumetaikaze December 13 2009, 00:19:05 UTC

Yeah, the angst for these two was getting a little overwhelming and I am honest to god woeful at writing it, so I figured I liven things up a little XP
Glad you liked! Thanks for commenting <3