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Kai/Ruki - Doing Something Drastic - Oneshot

Jul 09, 2009 01:57

Title: Doing Something Drastic
Author: tsumetaikaze
Band/Pairing: Ruki/Kai/Ruki [GazettE]
Genre: Humour, Romance
Rating: PG-13/R? (suggestions)
Warnings: Serious childishness XD
Disclaimer: Hah! Nice one. No.
Summary: He’d gone from relatively okay pick-up lines to trashy ones, innocent pats on the back to out and out groping, bad jokes to downright ( Read more... )

pairing: kai/ruki, band: the gazette, !fanfiction

Comments 37

xxshamisen July 8 2009, 17:18:37 UTC

All I have to say for this is ♥. :3

psychoheroine July 8 2009, 17:25:51 UTC

cliffhanger! xD this fic is not fail, it's pure LOVE.
awesome. ima add this to my mems. ;)

merumaru July 8 2009, 17:39:26 UTC

i like this.. haha the annoying ruki who persevere and the blur kai XD

kawasakininja July 8 2009, 18:57:09 UTC

Ahh, I love your Ruki/Kai stories. They are so amusing. I loved your characterization of Ruki in this one. Little selfish bastard. Yes, yes he is more than that but still :)))

He wanted to make fun of his band mates on national television with total disregard for their embarrassment; he did exactly that, and more often than not had a good laugh while he was at it.
Are we talking about poor little Reita here?

I loved Ruki's frustration but a strong determination not to give up! Kai really gave him a run for his money. The world’s most infuriatingly ignorant drummer. LOL

Flustered Kai was great, all of Kai was great actually. How he really tried to ignore all of them. But I adored all of them! The whole cast was so great Uruha, Aoi and Reita. They were all pure gold.

So…” Ruki let his eyes fall to Kai’s lips and back up. “How about that ‘something drastic’, hm?”
Fu, fu. Great way to end this, loved Ruki's line, you wrote it perfectly! I could really see that moment.

tsumetaikaze July 9 2009, 00:34:05 UTC

I'm so glad the ending was okay! There was much deliberating about that and I changed it a dozen times, I swear.
And yes, yes we were talking about Reita. >D
Aaaaw I love writing flustered Kai, he's so adorable ^^
Thanks for the lovely comment as always!
<333

fairydrop July 8 2009, 19:14:41 UTC

oh, yes dear, it has turned out awesome... I think I will try this kind of seduction... annoy somebody until the point of love....

Thank you for the idea!

tsumetaikaze July 9 2009, 00:31:41 UTC

-gigglesnort- oh yes, when you look at it like that it really doesn't make much sense, does it?
haha, I wish you luck!
Thanks for commenting <3