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star54kar November 15 2009, 04:32:00 UTC
I enjoyed this.

You wove each fragment together very well. It felt raw and real and I love the way that Ron helps keep Harry teetered to reality.

Wonderful work, and thank you for sharing:)

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tsumetaikaze November 15 2009, 08:05:01 UTC
Thank you very much!
So glad you enjoyed :)

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lordes November 15 2009, 08:46:18 UTC
This was really really good! I loved the way each part was the same but had a different situation (does that make sense?) and every time Ron was there to do it right, to understand him, to be there for him..

It wasn't really that dark I guess, or maybe I just missed something.

I really liked it, good work m'lovely :)

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tsumetaikaze November 17 2009, 00:44:03 UTC
Haha, yes that makes sense :) And I sort of meant 'dark' for me. My stuff is normally pure nonsense humour, but this is completely different. Also sort-of-dark in relation to Harry's emotions... hence the '-ish- after 'Dark'.
But yes, thanks for commenting and I'm so glad you liked XD
<3

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shocolate November 15 2009, 12:26:01 UTC
Of course only Ron can keep him together.

That was really moving.

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tsumetaikaze November 17 2009, 00:45:05 UTC
Thank you!
<3

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hpuckle November 15 2009, 23:08:14 UTC
Gorgeous. Ron takes such good care of his boy! ♥

xxx

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tsumetaikaze November 17 2009, 00:45:28 UTC
Aww, he really does :)
Thanks for commenting!

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shes_gone November 16 2009, 18:09:06 UTC
This is really lovely. ♥.

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tsumetaikaze November 17 2009, 00:23:16 UTC
thank you so much ^^

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