Asmodeus/Raphael drabbles 026-030

Dec 05, 2010 20:00

I've decided to write five of the Asmodeus/Raphael drabbles every month and post them on the first Sunday of each month. So unless I slack off or finish early (unlikely, lol), that means there'll be new A/R drabbles each month from now through February 2012. :D ( Read more... )

pairing: asmodeus/raphael, biblical fiction

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theshirelife December 6 2010, 06:54:46 UTC
As usual, my love, I find your writing and treatment of the characters superb. I truly mean that. I'm also glad, as always, to see Beelzebub show up. Can't say why he fascinates me so much... it could be the look you gave him, it could be the fact that is Wrath, or it could be his thing with Lucifer... or it could be all of the above.

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tsuru_san December 15 2010, 03:32:15 UTC
Thank you, my dear! Hmm,I actually get a lot of comments like this about Beelzebub. He certainly is very different from the other demons, and I think that kind of appeals to some people.

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theshirelife December 15 2010, 03:39:02 UTC
Ah, and here I thought I was original in my choice. *smirk*

p.s. If you want to keep reading my HP fics, they're at sugarquillpress now. You'll have to join to read them like the other comm. Oh, and I've started to post the Moody story there. Got the first nine chapters up so that when I post to ff.net I can post the same chapter in SQP.

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tsuru_san December 15 2010, 03:49:31 UTC
Yay, I joined! This weekend after I move out of my dorm, I plan to go on a fanfic reading marathon, and yours and halosphere's stories are at the top of my list. :D

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marian_vel December 6 2010, 08:14:02 UTC
oh these are wonderful!

see Asmodeus as a father is a bit funny, the 29 is a pretty interesting vision of how the other demons were born, although I think I prefer Asmodeus as a fallen angel... and I do not need to comment how much I love Lucifer/Beelzebub

and 30 made me a little sad to rafael, for Asmodeus have used him that way

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tsuru_san December 15 2010, 03:14:27 UTC
Thank you!

Asmodeus actually has five children (that he knows of), but Zen is the only one he gets along with. XD I figured the Lucifer/Beelzebub would be well-received. Those plotbunnies are active!

Poor Raphael indeed. He gets to take back a little control next time though. I have some good ideas in mind for the next set of drabbles.

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marian_vel December 16 2010, 10:54:38 UTC
Zen is very cute and seemingly quite different from Asmodeus in the question of innocence and naivety :P, the others children must to be more like him in this issue.

have five children and only get along with one, must be strange.
it makes me think about the mothers of his children, they are probably human...

I can barely wait for this! I was even wondering if he could escape or something like that.

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tsuru_san December 18 2010, 19:43:06 UTC
Yeah, Zen is kind of weird by demon standards. Nobody bothers him though because he's Asmodeus's son. His other children are much more normal.

Actually Asmodeus's children (that he knows of) are all from demon mothers. He tends to look down on humans a lot, and unless he's trying to tempt someone important, Asmodeus generally prefers to have sex with other demons.

Eh, poor Raphael won't be escaping, but it should be an interesting drabble nonetheless. Lucifer even makes an appearance.

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jestana December 6 2010, 17:27:18 UTC
Fabulousness! The idea that Asmodeus and Raphael were friends at one time is rather heartbreaking. *sniff* Poor Raphael.

That's pretty cool, that Asmodeus would go to Raphael to help his son. *grin* Shows how much he trusts him, despite the fact that he's a demon and Raphael's and angel.

Hee! Asmodeus in dad!mode. :) I'd never thought about him having kids, but he certainly gets around enough for it to be possible.

Oooooh. An interesting AU idea. Though I admit I prefer Asmodeus being a fallen angel. ;)

*pets Raphael* Poor little angel.

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tsuru_san December 15 2010, 03:19:59 UTC
Thanks, luv! I have at least one other drabble/ficlet lying around with this theme. I really need to finish that. Maybe after finals. *crosses fingers*

Shows how much he trusts him
Eh, not really. XD Asmodeus is just a pragmatist who knows that Raphael's the best healer and is easily manipulated into being compassionate.

I'd never thought about him having kids,
He's actually got five (that he knows of, lol), but Zen is the only kid Asmodeus actually gets along with. The others are all varying degrees of estranged.

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jestana December 15 2010, 03:27:43 UTC
Whee! I'm looking forward to reading it! (I finished my finals this morning. Whew!)

Good point. He knew exactly who to go to.

I can see why the others would be estranged from him if they're more like him than Zen.

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maliyawong December 6 2010, 18:03:30 UTC
Always love to read more about the angels and demons. Personally, I kinda like Asmodeus having always been demon more, but him being a fallen angel is also interesting. Having a multiple past choice is ALWAYS fun. :-)

Asmodeus's son Zen was cute too. ^^ And so were Lucifer and Beezlebub.

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tsuru_san December 15 2010, 03:10:32 UTC
Thank you!

I kinda like Asmodeus having always been demon more
I originally was using this so that when Asmodeus fell in love with Raphael, he would have never had any previous experience with Love or other virtuous emotions, but then my canon plotline changed, and I went with the Fallen angel background instead. However, I do still like the idea awfully much so it's about time I dusted it off once in a while.

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randomicicle January 13 2011, 20:41:33 UTC
So I've basically stalked you today and there wasn't a single moment where I didn't love it.

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tsuru_san January 24 2011, 05:13:46 UTC
Haha, well I'm certainly not complaining! XD

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tsuru_san January 24 2011, 05:14:34 UTC
Haha, well I'm certainly not complaining!

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