Comments | tsuru_san: Biblical Fic: Fate Refracted

tsuru_san

Biblical Fic: Fate Refracted

Aug 09, 2011 07:46

What's this? A full-length fic? Why yes! XD ...okay, it's not that long, but at least it's bigger than a drabble, lol.

So here's a bit of AU Asmodeus/Raphael for you all. This one was started waaaaay back in April and then got set aside. However, I've recently begun another storyline with my RP partner halosphere, and we're doing an AU featuring angel! ( Read more... )

pairing: asmodeus/raphael, biblical fiction

Comments 10

halosphere August 9 2011, 12:26:12 UTC

*applaudes you* Poor little angel, Asmodeus is such a sweet thing and Raphael so different from who he used to be. The conflict is beautifully written. Just... Poor Asmodeus. *hugs him* ~ <3

Weak, so weak-that is how the Archangel feels. He is never strong enough to put a stop to Raphael's advances. His former-friend. His present enemy. The being he has always loved.
;______________________________;

*applaudes some more* :D

tsuru_san August 10 2011, 00:23:57 UTC

*grin* Thank you! I do love my angel whomping...regardless of which one is the angel. XDDD But yeah, poor Asmodeus indeed. He wants to resist, and it hurts him to be with Raphael this way, but at the same time it's better in his mind than nothing at all. ;___;

Bravo! theishtargate August 9 2011, 12:55:32 UTC

Another stupendous work of art! Your talent with words is a precious gift. :)

Re: Bravo! tsuru_san August 10 2011, 00:28:25 UTC

Awww, thank you, hon!

jestana August 9 2011, 16:40:25 UTC

SQUEE! You posted fic! *reads eagerly* Oh, poor Asmodeus! *glomps him and hugs him tight* I like how you wrote them as their opposites. Still them, but different. Can't wait to read more!

tsuru_san August 10 2011, 00:30:36 UTC

Thanks a lot, I'm glad you liked it! Poor wibbly Asmodeus, but I gotta admit, I do get a kick out of writing him as an angel from time to time. *grin*

jestana August 10 2011, 02:51:25 UTC

I have a lot of fun tormenting Raphael when I write him and Asmodeus, so I understand completely. :D *pokes at steampunk bit*

cattygabriel August 9 2011, 19:12:21 UTC

NEW FIC!

This was beautiful and sad. ;_; *hugs Asmodeus* Really heartbreaking. The way Raphael toys with him is just cruel, and I love how you didn't just do a switcharoo with them acting the same as they did in your demon!Asmodeus/angel!Raphael fics; they've got their own distinct personalities, like with Raphael not flaunting the shadows like Asmodeus would have done.

And I cannot wait for the next Lucifer/Beelzebub installment. Especially since I'm supposed to beta it... XP

tsuru_san August 10 2011, 00:40:24 UTC

Yup! And way about time for some A/R. I feel like I've been posting mostly Lucifer/Beelzebub, though I'm not complaining about that. X3

Thank you, I really tried to make this more than just a body swap. Like the way angel!Asmodeus gave in to Lust but angel!Raphael generally remains steadfast. Or as you mentioned, the bit with the shadows. *grin*

I don't want to say that Asmodeus as a demon lacks subtlety because he can be quite the "mystery man" when it suits his purposes, but it's mainly a tool whereas demon!Raphael lives and breathes enigma all the time. He's...very complicated. I also find these two are both more emotionally messed up when they're in opposite roles this way.

Haha, not to worry, you'll be the first to read chapter 2. I need my Egyptologist beta after all. XD

cattygabriel August 10 2011, 06:38:07 UTC

Me neither. XD

Yeah, I noticed that too! :D

Mmm. There is an incomplete fic somewhere about Fallen!Gabriel and Fallen!Uriel having a bit of fun torturing an angel, and Uri-mun and I had also RPed with our Fallen versions a bit; what was most chilling was probably the way you could still see hints of who they were, but warped. And they were both royally messed up. :D (Though I still think she was much better at it than I was.)

Awesome! :D :D :D