if anyone you are willing could you read/edit my essay? the first page amd a half of so have been editited, so it's really the rest that needs to be edited. thanks
I like it a lot. I have a couple minor suggestions, but rather than going "over use of word here" I think I"ll just paste it into a document and email it to you so you can actually view it instead of playing tag with the letters written above.
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cause... when the book started, america was already at war?
a couple quotes are missing their quotation marks
leper never did make it to battle, if he had, he wouldnt have been able to escape and go back home so easily
other than that... good
i admit i only skimmed but i thought i should help you a little bit at the very least
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