AGH YOU LEAVE US THERE! *Hand-motions* This was great, wonderful buildup of tension, of the ust and life-and-death/mystery varieties. Poor Molly. :( Can't wait for more!
I know, poor Molly :( Alas the series this is part of is called "The English Dance of Death" so she is just the first casualty. I'm going to start the next bit today, but considering this story took me three months... well let's just say I'm not the speediest writer.
You've killed poor Molly? Bad, very bad. And Mrs. Hudson next? That's beyond bad! Still, I'm looking forward to more. I really enjoy your style of narration. Well done!!
Upset Kill her? It wasn't me who upset killed her, Mycroft red_chapel! That was Moriarty! :P But I'm glad you enjoyed it, and also that you have a theory on the next victim.
ooh, so excited this is out! But, a CLIFFHANGER AT THE END WAAAT D< You better get cracking at that next installment (which makes me very happy in fact, as the COMPLETE in the title implies otherwise, aha)
Ugh, the morgue scene handled beautifully here. Made me involuntarily shudder in my chair.
I'm sorry, the cliffhanger is due to the terrible influence of Mofftis! (I am blaming it on them, anyway.) I'm going to start the next installment today. Originally this whole story was Chapter 1 in a longer story but I didn't want to scare people off with a 17K word chapter, so I broke things up. I'm glad the morgue scene worked for you because it gave me loads of problems!
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Ugh, the morgue scene handled beautifully here. Made me involuntarily shudder in my chair.
Love it!
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And needless to say I love your icon.
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