You are right, you don't know Nur, Amaya and Roci. They aren't random friends of Isabel, they are the total number of them (plus Karim and Jorge). They throw her a birthday party every year, which we will see later on. So I thought I'd introduce them beforehand... do you think I should mention at least some of them earlier on, in a letter or something? I could change that when I make the final revision.
*hugs* Thank you again for commenting! Means a lot.
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I *love* your story, really; I enjoy reading it very much indeed (poor Carla!).
Maybe I'm being stupid, but do we know who all the people in the chat are? Or are they, except for Charlie and Fina, just random friends of Isabel's?
Can't wait for the next installment!
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You are right, you don't know Nur, Amaya and Roci. They aren't random friends of Isabel, they are the total number of them (plus Karim and Jorge). They throw her a birthday party every year, which we will see later on. So I thought I'd introduce them beforehand... do you think I should mention at least some of them earlier on, in a letter or something? I could change that when I make the final revision.
*hugs* Thank you again for commenting! Means a lot.
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