No Haven For This Heart (3/9)

Jan 29, 2011 20:12

Title: No Haven For This Heart (3/9)
Words: ~4450
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Kara Thrace, Lee Adama, Bill Adama, Sharon Agathon
Summary: Season 3 AU. Kara reups with the Colonial Fleet but her choices have left her with a new set of consequences. Kara becomes overwhelmed with her life as it is, and is left with only one, desperate choice.
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!story: no haven for this heart

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ecstaticdance January 30 2011, 05:25:32 UTC
Nice job with Lee, and a nice peek at Cally.

I'm feeling as bad for poor Sharon here as for Kara. Talk about blind-sided.

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rayruz February 1 2011, 16:23:13 UTC
I know! I feel so bad for throwing Sharon into the mix like that, but I needed a real rock bottom moment, I don't think Kara ever hit it in canon, so she just kinda spiraled and tried and fell and tried and never really recovered.

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thegreenkitty January 30 2011, 06:24:26 UTC
Ray,

Thank you for this...I love that you're exploring vital aspects of Kara's storyline that got swept up into Torn and then dismissed.

Your movements between real time and flashbacks are eerily flawless. As in, OMG, heartwrenching.

Kara's break down here feels honest and understandable. I'm really glad it's you writing this part of her story too...b/c I know you'll do it justice. <3

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rayruz February 2 2011, 13:38:23 UTC
I'm really happy to be writing this and so glad you're enjoying it! :)

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elzed January 30 2011, 09:23:39 UTC
Oh, harsh. Love how after all this, she just handed her to Lee. Wonder how his wife will react? ...

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rayruz February 2 2011, 13:38:45 UTC
I've got plans, mwahaha... :)

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callmeonetrack January 30 2011, 13:05:50 UTC
Poor Kara! Poor Lee! Poor baby Seph!! EEEK. FIX IT, RAY!

Sniff. So much hurt. I'm really interested in seeing how Kara manages to get back on track here since she's even more damaged and out of control than we ever got to see in canon. (Wonders if the fleet has equiv of a mental hospital ship...)

Yay Cally to the rescue!

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rayruz February 2 2011, 13:41:59 UTC
Yeah, yeah, the fixing will happen, just be patient okay!

I've got plans for Kara (and her mental health).

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lotus79 January 30 2011, 13:44:10 UTC
Ooh, this is getting very dark and angsty (just the way I like it!)

Poor Lee, what a way to find out. I can't wait for Dee's reaction, too.

And of course poor Kara. She's reeeeaaallly messed up, isn't she?

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rayruz February 2 2011, 13:42:45 UTC
Yes, she is. But I think she's about hit rock bottom right now.

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