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No Haven For This Heart (6/9)

Mar 08, 2011 00:17

Title: No Haven For This Heart (6/9)
Words: ~5500
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Kara Thrace, Sharon Agathon, Lee Adama, Karl Agathon, Dr. Stoffa
Summary: Season 3 AU. Kara reups with the Colonial Fleet but her choices have left her with a new set of consequences. Kara's been sentenced to a month in the brig and faces a dishonorable discharge if she doesn't ( Read more... )

!story: no haven for this heart

Comments 23

rdave1 March 9 2011, 18:47:48 UTC

It's a semi-happy chapter!

It's nice to see the slow progess Kara is making and I adore how her world lights up when she has Seph. Always nice to see Lee understanding Kara's point and trying to meet her half way.

I just adore Seph, I think between her, Uncle Karl and the Doc, mom and dad may be okay.

Great chapter, Ray!

rayruz March 11 2011, 12:53:12 UTC

I'm so happy I can finally write some positivity into this story! And I'm so glad it's enjoyable.

miere85 March 10 2011, 01:53:11 UTC

Awesome chapter. You did a good job on touching many issues in counseling sections. And Lee and Kara finally have a clam conversation.

rayruz March 11 2011, 12:53:52 UTC

A clam conversation!? lol. Wonderful typo. :)

But yes, it really is. I feel like things never got back to the way they needed to be in canon.

mserrada March 10 2011, 04:56:12 UTC

Through bits and pieces Kara's experiences are revealed and the healing begins.
Good choice showing some of Lee's POV. Really needed because he was coming across as a total Bast***.
And a light finally dawns on on him what type of time Kara had...
More soon, sooner, soonest!

rayruz March 11 2011, 12:54:42 UTC

Well, he had no idea what happened to Kara (he still doesn't really, but he's got a suspicion now). I'm gonna get writing soon. :) No worries.

lotus79 March 11 2011, 11:26:34 UTC

Ooh, I've been so hanging out for more of this fic this week! Yay!

I love the snapshot format you've used for the thirty days in the brig - little glimpses of her progress.

And the lovely understated truce scene at the end... gorgeous. :)

Can't wait for more.

rayruz March 11 2011, 12:55:14 UTC

I had to do the snapshot format or I was going to lose my freaking mind with this chapter. I'm glad you're enjoying.

aurora_0811 March 19 2011, 17:53:26 UTC

Huzzah! Comment ahoy ( ... )

rayruz March 20 2011, 15:10:16 UTC

BIG COMMENT IS BIG.

I like big comments.

This chapter was astoundingly hard to write! Such a fine balance of everything. Hopefully Kara will be accepting hugs soon, gods know that girl needs them. :)

Next chapter is now up! Wheee. Go run. Read.