No Haven For This Heart (9/9)

Apr 15, 2011 15:28

Title: No Haven For This Heart (9/9)
Words: ~4000
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Kara Thrace, Lee Adama and minor appearances by Racetrack, Narcho, Sam
Summary: Season 3 AU. Kara reups with the Colonial Fleet but her choices have left her with a new set of consequences. Things are not adding up in Kara's life. Her only conclusion now is that Leoben might ( Read more... )

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rayruz May 3 2011, 03:08:39 UTC
I don't think it will be for certain! But I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting along the way.

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velvety2010 April 19 2011, 06:44:28 UTC
nice! i was starting to get worried about maelstorm for a while there. was nice to end on a positive, hopeful note.

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rayruz May 3 2011, 03:09:01 UTC
I think this fic just ended up being a convulted fixit on Maelstrom.

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rdave1 April 19 2011, 13:15:58 UTC
What an excellent ending to a lovely story.:)

I really hope that is is not your last fandom story because that would be sad.

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rayruz May 3 2011, 03:11:08 UTC
I think my output is going to decrease but I don't think I'm done...but this may be my last big thing. I'm so glad you liked it.

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mserrada April 23 2011, 05:42:32 UTC
Enjoyed this story so much. You managed to bring Kara and Lee back together in a believable manner and yet didn't make light of the issues either were dealing with. Good job!

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rayruz May 3 2011, 03:14:07 UTC
Thanks, hon. It was so hard to work on but I think it came together nicely. It seems like it ended up working.

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ddt73 May 4 2011, 01:49:14 UTC
You had Kara spiraling down even worse then cannon. I was leery how you played her dream with Leoben.

It looked like things were falling apart. But you had both our pilots stop making the same mistakes and have them talk and be there for each other. While a seemingly simple idea, such a big step for these two, Kara willingly open up to Lee and Lee just listening and then being there for her. Such a wonderful scene. :)

Thanks for a great story. :)

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