Just Maybe

[rayruz]

Title: Just Maybe (a Smut-pilogue to No Haven for this Heart)
Words: ~3000
Rating: NC-17, XXX, whichever you prefer for dirty sexy fun
Pairing: Kara/Lee
A/N: Thanks to taragel  for the beta and sci_fi_shipper  for listening to me complain a lot.

Comments

[callmeonetrack]

Aw, I liked what you added to the last part especially. Definitely a good call to put it in Kara's POV there and to leave it slightly unresolved too.

And mmm for the sexy!pilot!times!

[ecstaticdance]

Nice writing, Ray. Sweet and sexy and complicated and ultimately really very simple. I also like the image of Kara pushing Lee along while Lee holds Kara back. They're both almost elemental in those respects -- as if no one else could do the same for the other. They balance each other so nicely.

[kdbleu]

This manages to be sweet and totally hot at the same time. BRAVO! I love that it's open ended, more real that way.

[elzed]

awwwwwww

they are adorable. and hot, obv. but adorable...

[scifishipper]

Very hot and sweet - a wonderful cap to your fic. They did a lot of work to get to this point and it is satisfying to see them give things a try. Bravo!