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Chess Pieces

Jun 21, 2012 20:57

Title: Chess Pieces (or five times Clint and Natasha don't have sex and the first time they do)
Authors: rayruz
Fandom: Marvel Cinematic Universe
Rating: R
Characters: Natasha Romanoff, Clint Barton
Summary: Clint Barton trusts Natalia Romanova, even when he probably shouldn't.
Length: ~8500 words
Notes: beta'd and encouraged by the wonderful workerbee73. I never ( Read more... )

#avengers: natasha romanoff, pairing: natasha/clint, length: over 1000, #avengers: clint barton, rating: r

Comments 31

im_ridiculous June 22 2012, 07:44:15 UTC

Hi there, just have to tell you I loved this. LOVED it! I LOVE the way you write them - beautiful dialogue - and the way you show how their closeness, that trust, kind of seared into being at the start before they realmsed what was happening and then grew and deepened over time. There's something beautifully visual about the way you write too which I really enjoy. Also, hot! And lovely! Thankyou so much for this story!

rayruz June 22 2012, 13:42:53 UTC

Awww! Thank you so much for this comment! It really warmed my heart. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

im_ridiculous June 23 2012, 03:06:51 UTC

I really, really did!
Also... would you mind my friending you? I love some of the things you've written and would love to keep up with what you post :) No dramas either way though!... I've only just come out of PilotsShipperAnon-dom over on Bee's journal, so still navigating how this all works!! :)

rayruz June 23 2012, 03:07:46 UTC

Wait, are you the mysterious anon Bee talks about?

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rayruz June 23 2012, 03:08:07 UTC

*blush* Thank you so much! I am glad that it came out so well.

stretch June 23 2012, 04:32:04 UTC

AH-MAZ-ING! There's nothing about this that isn't great.

rayruz June 24 2012, 00:48:05 UTC

Your icon is wonderful, BTW.

Thank you so much that's a huge compliment.

mserrada June 23 2012, 23:18:21 UTC

Really like how you play the two of them off each. Cold sparks and hot comfort.

rayruz June 24 2012, 00:48:35 UTC

They've got a very yin-yang thing going on with each other. They're total opposites and they balance each other so well.

nicole_anell June 23 2012, 23:23:11 UTC

Squeeee Clint/Natasha history fic!

Deadly dancing and flirting! Life-saving! Wound-sewing!

“It’s taken me some time to get my mind around the fact that Barton has apparently lost his."
That line is SO Fury, lol.

Card. Flowers. Candy’s nice, too.
Heh. His whole reaction here is priceless.

“Really? Anything out there to focus on?”

She sat in a petulant silence for a solid ten-count. “I saw a deer an hour ago.”

“Fascinating.” A smirk curved his lip. “Well unless you’ve been wondering if it’s carrying biological weaponry for the last sixty minutes, there must have been something on your mind.”
Still love that line. ALL OF PART FOUR, the dialogue is fabulous. But I think #5 is my favorite - maybe it's just bonding over Stark problems, but moreso because I feel like it's the real emotional climax between them, the attention he pays to her and the realization he knows and sees her as a person.

“Natasha,” he said and his voice meant I’m sorry.
*hearrrrts* Awesome fic!

rayruz June 24 2012, 00:49:22 UTC

But I think #5 is my favorite - maybe it's just bonding over Stark problems, but moreso because I feel like it's the real emotional climax between them, the attention he pays to her and the realization he knows and sees her as a person.

NEVER EVER EVER Let Tony know this. He's insufferable as it is already.

Whoops, Sorry I think Natasha took over my fingers there for a second.

I'm so so glad you liked it.