HEEE Shunsui is always the person that lightens up the mood. ^^
And yeah, Matsumoto plays a fairly interesting role in Hitsugaya's life, being both his subordinate and his superior. So it's interesting to mess with that relationship a bit.
LOL. I actually went onto the Bleach Wikia, searched "female" and just wrote down most of the main names. O.O I know, I'm horrible ><
My favorite part was definitely the scene between Rangiku & Hitsugaya at the end. All the metaphors for his eyes were well done, I think my favorite line was:
""Well?" He raises a eyebrow, a perfect arch over the windows to his soul. They're closed, but never for long when she's around. She forces them open, like Momo before her. Because that's what partners do, they unlock you. Pain pours out, in waves;tidal-waves;tsunamis;hurricanes;tornados;volcanoes."
Really, the imagery there was amazing!
Also, I loved the part where Shunsui didn't show up to work for a week cause of Lisa's death XD I always thought there was something in their relationship ^^
And, I hate to be a nag, but Nel's last name is spelled Odershvanck ^^; just a little correction there.
I hope you update soon! This is getting more interesting by the minute! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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sorry, but what does M.O. stand for? I tried googling it, but it's not coming up ^^;;
I can't wait for the next chapter >,,<)b It's been such a loooooooooong time since I've read a fanfic and I wasn't disappointed when I picked this to be my first fanfic in the last 2 years!! X3bb
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HEEE Shunsui is always the person that lightens up the mood. ^^
And yeah, Matsumoto plays a fairly interesting role in Hitsugaya's life, being both his subordinate and his superior. So it's interesting to mess with that relationship a bit.
LOL. I actually went onto the Bleach Wikia, searched "female" and just wrote down most of the main names. O.O I know, I'm horrible ><
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My favorite part was definitely the scene between Rangiku & Hitsugaya at the end. All the metaphors for his eyes were well done, I think my favorite line was:
""Well?" He raises a eyebrow, a perfect arch over the windows to his soul. They're closed, but never for long when she's around. She forces them open, like Momo before her. Because that's what partners do, they unlock you. Pain pours out, in waves;tidal-waves;tsunamis;hurricanes;tornados;volcanoes."
Really, the imagery there was amazing!
Also, I loved the part where Shunsui didn't show up to work for a week cause of Lisa's death XD I always thought there was something in their relationship ^^
And, I hate to be a nag, but Nel's last name is spelled Odershvanck ^^; just a little correction there.
I hope you update soon! This is getting more interesting by the minute! I can't wait for the next chapter!
p.s.
sorry, but what does M.O. stand for? I tried googling it, but it's not coming up ^^;;
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Ah~ I'll make note of that, but at the moment, I'm a bit too lazy to go and correct it. LOL
M.O = Modus Operandi or "method of operation"
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It's been such a loooooooooong time since I've read a fanfic and I wasn't disappointed when I picked this to be my first fanfic in the last 2 years!! X3bb
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I actually finished the fic, and it's posted on my website...
Here's the URL if you want to finish the rest of the fic. ^^
https://sites.google.com/site/candlewaxrealities/contents/bleach
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O My God.
*Off to read the Gin/Rangiku one-shots; you are going to kill me >,,<)b*
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Thank you for writing~
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Please keep up this amazing story, I'd love to see what more happens! <3
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haha I have most of the chapters written already, so it's just a matter of putting them up. ^^ I hope I don't disappoint hehe~
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