fanfiction || Just Don't [Bleach] || drabble

[tumbleberry]

Comments

[miara56]

BRILLIANT. =D

The use of stream of consciousness to portray Hitsugaya's thoughts during that moment is clever, and honestly, I think you captured him perfectly. ^_^ This is a good scene to imagine, especially in the anime when the scene fades to black, then he finally goes mad. Awesome job~! ^^

*Will now be going back to watch the episode with this drabble in my thoughts, if you don't mind.*

[tumbleberry]

Thank you <3

^^ I tried~
Yeah, the moment really stood out to me in the manga/anime so I thought I'd take a stab at it. XD

[kaibasgirl]

Amazing job! That was really..wow, so much emotion condensed into so few lines. I love your sentence structure, it got the raw emotion across very well.

[tumbleberry]

Thanks. <3

^^

i like your icon
TEEEHEE~

[ironias]

This was great. It was as if I were feeling Hitsugaya's desperation.
Brilliant ♥

[tumbleberry]

Thank you <3 ^^