fanfiction || Coming to Terms [Naruto] || Snippet

[tumbleberry]

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[name_me_regret]

Very sad but still sweet. You have an interesting writing style. I loved the description of the spiders, which I imagine describe his feelings and as they cover his throat and mouth its' him trying to choke back the wail; his sobs. Very good ficlet.

nyah, first comment =D

[tumbleberry]

thanks. <333

Well everyone can interpret it the way they want.
^^ And that's the way I want it to be.

Thank you for the commennnntt~

[e313]

i like the writing. i like the desctiption of Kakashi at the monument, his despair and grief is so palpably real, and i like how 'team', how Naruto is able to help him, make it bearable by being there.

[tumbleberry]

Yeah.

You don't usually get to see Kakashi's 'pain'.
And it's rare that he shows his true emotions, so I figured that even if he does get close to someone, this is as 'personal' as he's ever going to become. ^^

Thanks for the comment! <333

[octocoffee]

This is lovely. I love your style, how it's very stream-of-consciousness and run-on poetic. It captures those feelings of grief well. The clarity of Naruto's character strikes a nice contrast as well. How he's a very solid guy in this moment, and Kakashi can only think in circles. Thank you so much for sharing!

[tumbleberry]

Thank you. ^^ <3

[tumbleberry]

XD Thanks. <3

Kakashi can't be so cool and awesome all the time. ^_~