comment is all over the placenagasasuNovember 22 2010, 06:57:43 UTC
Sticky cherryjuice slithers down the cuts, shining glass marbles that melt on contact. I got a bit hung-up on that line trying to figure out if it was literal or metaphorical. I could see cherryjuice being some weird quirk of the killer, but it was the "glass marbles that melt" that keyed me into it was a figurative phrase
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LOL jkjk
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Did I tell you I'm a sucker for alliteration? ♥
what is my life. this is beautiful, reminds of the movie poster of the Silence of the Lambs
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I don't make alliterations on purpose.
LOL
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now if only you would update XDDDD
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hw...
the bane of my existence. T^T
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alot of my writing is metaphorical LOL Just keep that in mind for future updates. XD
Well, it's pretty obvious who the antagonist is. XDDD But, for the sake of 'mystery', I won't say it now. ahaha~
Thanks. XD I owe credit to google image search and deviantART for the amazing stock images.
Whoot whoot. Thank you~ I hope you like this one. XD
I'll... post them everywhere I can, so yeah. You can do either. ^^
^^ <3
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Thanks. ^^
A solid hook is very important yo~
XDDD
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