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dayofcaligula November 28 2010, 03:58:40 UTC
This is nice. I live the similes.

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tumbleberry November 28 2010, 04:00:18 UTC
XD thanks. <3

Glad that you liked it. ^^

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tumbleberry November 28 2010, 13:47:45 UTC
Daw <3 Thanks.

Yeah, I was REALLY targeting the sensory-details in this fic. XD Glad that it worked for you. LOL

ZOMG, yes. GinRan = SPICYYYY~

^^ thank you~
I'm glad that you enjoyed it. <3

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kaibasgirl November 28 2010, 07:10:38 UTC
Are you like, taking a course in psychology or something? XD You keep writing disorder-inspired fics, lol.

Anyway, a very interesting take on Gin. It gives the GinRan relationship a whole new level of disturbing XDD (don't get me wrong, I'm a huge fan, through and through). I liked how the colors/tastes changed as Rangiku got older, especially how her words changed from "a muted teal" to "chocolate brown". Also, how her whispers changed from being the "colors of the rainbow" to the taste of blood. I think the way her colors/tastes changed also reflect the way Gin himself changed, and as Rangiku's innocence was slowly replaced with something more adult, so was his replaced with something more dangerous.

Again, very very interesting take on these two. I rather like it XD

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tumbleberry November 28 2010, 13:46:15 UTC
LOL I'm Sophomore in high school. XDDD
And I think this is my first disorder-inspired one? O.o... /is not sure. ><

OHYESH. Disturbing GinRan. <3 Yeah, this is supposed to be PART of the reason he left and when he says goodbye to her in person, without anyone else around. Gin's looking for that 'high' he was addicted to when they were younger. XDDD

Yep yep, the fact that they've grown older, and their voices/personality changed is definitely a driving factor in the fic. ^^

Thanks. <3333
I'm glad that you did. ^^

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vixenofargentum November 28 2010, 23:12:23 UTC
Interesting! A very beautiful Gin/Ran portrayal. Oh, why isn't there more for them ( ... )

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tumbleberry November 29 2010, 06:30:52 UTC
<3 thank you~
ZOMG that's so cool!

I've love to be able to TASTE sounds. <3333333

^^

Ah~ Well, since I don't know much about the actual condition, I assumed that the sensations would change as the sound of Rangiku's voice got deeper and she basically goes through puberty. LOL

It's okay~ <3 Nerds are the new COOL. XDDD

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