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*g*
I wrote a very short English essay about my favorite past time; watching football. I'm copying it here, now!

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[carimina]

no mutta toihan on loistava ! :o

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<3___<3 KIITTI!

SUCKS..

[flariariia]

Just kidding you!

If beer isn’t good enough, lemonade will do also.

XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD LOVE THIS 'UN. Witty!

Otherwise, there ain't much wrong with it, just a couple of things that sound better in a different way and so on. If you want to I can check it more slosely when the time is not forsaken by God.

Re: SUCKS..

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*g* Thanks! And huh, I already returned it to the teacher, so.. But thanks for offer, anyway. ^___^

Re: SUCKS..

[flariariia]

Oh, you'll survive.<3 If you want an english beta just poke me.

Re: SUCKS..

[tups]

Hee, good to know, thanks!