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turabiannights

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Dec 12, 2006 00:50

I love these things. Other haikus generated ( Read more... )

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cosimo_oxhead December 12 2006, 14:47:51 UTC

I don't like them. They're too abstruse for haiku. And isn't a haiku technically supposed to be about nature?

(Of course, it is possible you posted these in a sarcastic spirit, in which case I apologize for taking them too seriously. I have a head cold.)

turabiannights December 13 2006, 06:52:08 UTC

What says "sarcastic spirit" more than a haiku about pooping jelly beans?

cosimo_oxhead December 13 2006, 12:53:44 UTC

See, I missed that one. I'm not myself this week.

turabiannights December 24 2006, 07:21:08 UTC

It's okay. Pooping is kind of about nature, which could sort of qualify it as a haiku, right? I hope this week is going better for you.

byzantine84 December 12 2006, 22:55:12 UTC

2 permanent points
of damage to that i had
truly savored

mesaknight December 13 2006, 05:39:42 UTC

WHOA THERE, BUCKO

mesaknight December 13 2006, 05:40:03 UTC

Also, your new av gives me seizures. No, seriously.

mesaknight December 13 2006, 05:39:29 UTC

made my final days
at bowdoin all the nurses there
would dote upon me

This is the only one that made a lick of sense.