Brigits Flame - July Week 1

[turnaroundfic]

It hurt. Of that much she was sure. She could feel it pressing down on her chest, suffocating her, crushing the breath from her body. She struggled against it, gasping. It was going to kill her, she thought dimly. She'd never get it off, and it would just press and press and press down on her, and when they found her body three days later they'd

Comments

[lionteeth]

wow, this was inspirational! i loved the dialogue between cecilia and joanie. great job!

[turnaroundfic]

Thanks! It's tempting to take "Heavy" in a really morose direction, but all I could think about was weight lifting. :)

[jamais_toujours]

I loved this. Everything about it is realistic, especially the dialogue. :)

[turnaroundfic]

Thanks. I tend to write like I actually speak, which....isn't always a good thing. But I like writing conversations like me and my friends have.

[hathorx]

Oh, this was great! I really enjoyed it :)

Well done and good luck!

[turnaroundfic]

Thanks!

[musicrocks987]

I enjoyed this piece very much.
Love the dialouge between cecilia and joanie.
Great!!!!

Best Of Luck!

OoO~Stuck in the Stars~OoO

P.s. -- I adore the icon you have. I am a big twilight fan. =)

[turnaroundfic]

Thanks!

I'm sort of in love with Edward. :)

[musicrocks987]

Haha, I think everyone who has read the Twilight series has fallen in love with Edward. I mean how can you not?! =)

OoO~Stuck in the Stars~OoO

[introspicere]

Oh, I totally love this! ♥ It's such a cute take on the prompt. The banter between Cecilia and Joanie is just so hilarious and smooth that I smiled a lot while reading the piece. X) The ending is great, too. :)

Fantastic job and good luck! :D

[turnaroundfic]

Thanks! Smiling was the point. :)