as requested...

[turner23]

my apologies for the time it took to finish this story, may has been a month of travel and adventure. i had the immediate idea for this when i first read the request and it took me a good deal of time to wrangle it into this form. i'm still not totally happy with it, but if i keep working on it, it'll put to many other things on hold. so, with that

Comments

[darkentropy]

Chilling and creepy.
That was great:)
It definately sucked me in...

[turner23]

thank you for saying. it took awhile for me to figure out the bridging between the start and the middle, but it's good to know that it works...

[sarah_is_morgan]

Wow.
What a brilliant read.
Gave me goose bumps up my arms.

[turner23]

you're very welcome. this is the story you asked for, after all...

[sarah_is_morgan]

I think about the morality of art everyday. Chaining a dog up to starve to death or pushing a cow out of a helicopter, or displaying humans in various ways preserved in some kind of plastic resin

[turner23]

another truism, from robert anton wilson, a favorite philosopher of mine, reads "reality is what you get away with."

[laurelleaf]

Wow. That was fantastic.

[turner23]

oh, stop it... you'll make me blush...