ha ha poetry

Mar 04, 2004 11:39

The process

I hate
You hate
We all hate
I love
You love
We all love
I hate you
I love you
You think you know but you dont
I say my feelings
I feel guilt
DAMN YOU
I apologize
You accept
What the hell is that
DAMN YOU
I forget
Until the process starts over!

This is my so called "poem" tell me what you think it means.

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appena_repirare March 4 2004, 14:31:07 UTC
Kasey.. it deserves a bit more of Metaphysiclal simlies and some metaphors while yoru at it.....

also form a bit of twsiter.. use a petracchan sonnet sequence... but not using imabic pantameter....

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i think that is it.....

farwell kasey shea girven.

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hot_lips04 March 4 2004, 14:49:44 UTC
ayy, matthew..

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mikeys572 March 8 2004, 12:07:30 UTC
we all live in a yellow submarine.

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tv_whore March 9 2004, 12:45:15 UTC
i really dont get it

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