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Fill; Coffin shaped jewellery box

[swirlsofblue]

“Goodbye Nik,” Rebekah says, there are tears in her eyes, and an agonising sickness in her chest, but her words are strong, certain

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[fluffyfrolicker]

oh this is LOVELY, thank you so much ♥

She dreams in yellows and silvers; swords and necklaces and fields of corn, castles and painted sunsets.

beautiful, and such a good description of her.

She promised him forever and knows he needs to hold her close, lay her down in a precious jewellery box. She’s angry but she understands. They are hopelessly entwined and she can only leave if he lets her go.

OH, this broke my poor poor heart.

And they both play the game like they don’t still belong to each other.

GORGEOUS.

AND THE END ♥

I love this and thank you so much for writing it :)

Re: Fill; Coffin shaped jewellery box

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, I'm so happy you found it lovely <3.

Rebekah does have that special way of being heart-breaking ;).

Re: Fill; Coffin shaped jewellery box

[bleodswean]

Wow! What a great character study of Rebekah! This was really special!

Re: Fill; Coffin shaped jewellery box

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, glad you liked it :)

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[eternal_moonie]

Absolutely AWESOME!!!!

Re: Fill; Coffin shaped jewellery box

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, glad you found it awesome :)

[consumedly]

Re: Fill; Coffin shaped jewellery box

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, I'm glad that line resonated so well for you :)