Comments | tversan: Edge Of Forever

tversan

Edge Of Forever

Apr 19, 2011 21:57

Title: Edge Of Forever

Words: 745
Summary: The last moment in life doesn't have to be dramatic.
Warning: Deathfic
Rating: PG13

I owe so much to my lovely beta si_star_x . She helped me a lot and also came up with the title! THANK YOU FOREVER!

( Edge Of Forever... )

fanfic, dean, sam, supernatural

Comments 21

4thejourney April 19 2011, 20:28:43 UTC

Wow, you just broke my heart I think! T_T This was so sad but...peaceful, blessedly peaceful.
This line "And if Dean holds his hand, he can't feel it." *sniffles*
Lovely fic. <3

tversan April 19 2011, 20:31:07 UTC

Thank you! But sorry for breaking your heart =)
I'm so happy ypu liked it, though!

si_star_x April 19 2011, 21:01:35 UTC

I absolutely love this story. It's so bright regardless of the fact it's a death fic. I adore the idea of the sunshine and the birds, how Sam's ultimate demise is laying on cool grass with Dean by his side and reassuring him that it's all going to be okay. I loved this so much, it's a great fic and I will always remember you as the first person to ever trust my beta skills. ;-)

*Hugs*

tversan April 19 2011, 21:04:55 UTC

Aaaw. That's so nice words. I already thanked you a thousand times, but again, Thanks =)
You were an awesome beta, you should do it again!

si_star_x April 20 2011, 15:10:44 UTC

If you ever need my assistance just poke me and I'm sure I'll be more than happy to help out. *Hugs*

borgmama1of5 April 20 2011, 00:56:31 UTC

Reduced to tears.

tversan April 20 2011, 04:40:14 UTC

I'll give you a tissue =)
Thanks for revieving!

khakigrrl April 20 2011, 18:31:05 UTC

Awww...I love it. I especially love how it can be read two different ways:

1. Dean's alive and letting Sam go gently and peacefully.
2. Dean's already dead and is just waiting for Sam to finish dying before they can both leave.

digitalwave April 20 2011, 19:29:52 UTC

I think I'm going to take #2. Anything else just hurts too much.

si_star_x April 20 2011, 19:34:19 UTC

I didn't even think of #2. That's such a lovely idea.

tversan April 20 2011, 19:44:17 UTC

Thank you =)

I was actaully not thinking about the second option, even though I wanted people to think what they wanted too. I like it!
Makes me feel better too =)

digitalwave April 20 2011, 19:30:58 UTC

I love this, sweetie, even if you've made my heart hurt. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

tversan April 20 2011, 19:45:54 UTC

Thank you so much for commenting <3 But sorry for making your heart hurt.

digitalwave April 20 2011, 19:55:00 UTC

Only in a good way, I promise. :)

tversan April 20 2011, 19:56:17 UTC

good =)

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