Ace and Luffy being brothers

Nov 19, 2010 01:39

Title: On Surviving Heart Attacks
Canon: One Piece
Genre: Humour/Gen
Rating: PG-13 (For swearing)
Characters/Pairing: Ace, Luffy
Summary: Luffy drowns. A lot.

On Surviving Heart Attacks )

luffy, one piece, ace, fanfiction

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cmhuong November 21 2010, 09:19:53 UTC
Omg, i love it. It's so sweet and cute and yet it makes me all teary at the end. I can't never get over the fact that Oda killed Ace :-

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tweetthebirdy November 22 2010, 03:54:06 UTC
<333 Glad you liked! Yeah, 574 kind of punched me in the face too, especially as I only realised around Skypedia that no one dies and... Thanks Oda. Just, thanks.

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luminde November 21 2010, 12:57:01 UTC
"Sorry," Luffy tells him, lying sprawled on the grassy bank, his voice still weak from coughing. "Sorry you had to save me again. One day, you'll see. I'll be strong enough to save you."

WHYYYYYY T____________________T;;;

God, but I miss Ace like crazy. ODAAAA, HOW COULD YOUUU *sob*

Buh. Moving on, I love it! I can SO see Luffy doing everything you wrote. And I love how in denial Ace is! Such a kodomo-Ace thing to think.

a;skdf;alkmsdlk;fm;klsdmfkldms Aaaaaaaaaaaace ;________;

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tweetthebirdy November 22 2010, 03:58:56 UTC
WHYYYYYY T____________________T;;;

Because pain is good! 8DDD (Okay, I figured someone would kill me for that line, but I couldn't resist putting it in. xD)

YOUR ICON DOES NOT MAKE THINGS BETTER, NO IT DOES NOT. And this week's episode, ahahaha, brb heart breaking.

LOL, glad everyone seems IC, as I haven't written fanfiction in ages and this is pretty much the first time I've dipped into the OP fandom (having just caught myself up with the manga a few weeks go). Ahaha, ickle!Ace is a complete tsundere in my head, something I don't think he ever grew out of as he seems to try and kill everyone he's on good terms with when he first saw them. (Which makes a pretty good plot bunny for an Ace and Sabo first meeting.)

*asfdlkjsfdjklfsds with you*

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astridmyrna November 21 2010, 16:36:29 UTC
OMG, I'm loving this style, this plot, d'aaaaah! So much d'aaaah!

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tweetthebirdy November 22 2010, 04:00:40 UTC
You mean the style of Ace freaking out? :P

Every time I read about Ace and Luffy and look at pixiv fanart, all I can think is, these brothers. These brothers. Such dorks.

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tweetthebirdy November 22 2010, 04:01:29 UTC
*blushes and hides*

Thanks so much for the praise, and hurray that you liked. <3

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tweetthebirdy November 22 2010, 04:06:25 UTC
Also, your icon. I must keyboard smash over how adorable it is. ASFLJKSDFKJSD THEIR FACES.

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cherrichik November 23 2010, 01:42:03 UTC
i was cacking myself laughing... right up until the end.

then i cried.

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tweetthebirdy November 23 2010, 02:33:14 UTC
To be fair, I blame the slightly depressing tone of the ending ENTIRE ON ODA.

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