Retribution | Alexander

[twhitesakura]

Title: Retribution
Author: Whitesakura
Rating: PG
Pairing: Hephaistion/Alexander, Alexander/Bagoas
Disclaimer: I don't own any of them.
Summary: Hephaistion thinks there is such a thing as divine judgment.

Comments

[florachan]

Ah, you should so write more about these characters...you handle them so gracefully, and your prose is just...breathtaking.

Such a rich imagery in your writing, and symbolism. But there is also solidity, and strong characterization. How do you manage to balance between these two extremes is a mistery to me, but you do it magnificently.

beautiful.

[twhitesakura]

florachan! When I first saw the Alexander movie, I went online searching for info and your fics were the first I discovered. Thank you so much for the praise! I'm a very visual writer, so that explains the imagery. I also really love similes. But the strong characterization is a new one to me.

[baranduin]

Gorgeous story!

Thank you so much for posting the link to it on the MR community. I hope there will be much more from you in the future!

[twhitesakura]

Thank you. There is at least one more and another one which I still have to edit. So prepare yourself. ^_~

Re: Powerful

[twhitesakura]

*Dances* I never left someone speechless before. Thank you!

[anonymous]

Beautiful! The language is sheer poetry, the imagery is gorgeous. Extremely evocative, yet restrained way of dealing with the changes that Hephaistion faces - the then and now, Greece and Persia - the loss of innocence. Just lovely!