Gift for siDEADde!

Feb 19, 2010 07:18

You Are Loved.
Recipient: siDEADde
Rating: T
Summary: Jasper longs to give Alice a piece of her human life. He uses Leah to help hide his intentions from Alice. As Leah and Jasper engage on a cross country journey they find themselves finding more than they expected and more than they ever could have hoped for ( Read more... )

fic, winter 2010, gift

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septentrion1970 February 19 2010, 18:53:06 UTC
I love the way you go about Alice's backstory.

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SQUEEEEE!! sideadde February 20 2010, 02:28:19 UTC
Oh I was sooooooo excited when I saw the prompt that was chosen. It was definitely the one I wanted to see the most! I have my suspicions as to the author, the style is certainly familiar!

This is gorgeous, another chapter to add to my favorite ship in fanfic: Jasper|Leah, but only C&I Jasper|Leah. This is fantastic, so true to Mini's characterizations, with the author's subtle traits blended right in. Jasper using my nickname for Alice was a huge smile-inducer...how very flattering!

Best of the whole story though, the journal entries. I'm not a particularly emotional person, but I teared up while reading them. I love the transition from Alice's entries, youthful but knowing, southern "voice" just right from the sound in my head. Then the switch to Cynthia's child-like writing, naive and simple developing as the girl herself grew. So sad, but so beautiful at the end. I do believe that was all Alice needed to hear, that she was indeed loved.

Thank you so much for a piece so very close to me. I love it!

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ginny_weasley31 February 20 2010, 03:44:51 UTC
Really amazing, hon. I teared up through the journal entries. This was simply fantastic.

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anonymous February 20 2010, 19:33:57 UTC
This is by far one of my most favorite back stories, and the loveliest one of Alice. Thank you for writing this!

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musicdaydreams February 21 2010, 08:47:28 UTC
I loved this. I also teared up during this story, but started when Jasper and Leah were talking with Marie. Yes, I am a wuss, but this was so emotional and I'm just happy for Alice - that Jasper was able to "make it right".

I really loved Minisinoo's C&I and loved that this carried on with that relationship.

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