Back of My Head
Recipient: Demosthenes91
Rating: M
Warnings: There is a lemon, if that needs warning...
Summary: Edward will be alone again these holidays. Unless a fellow bus passenger can help him see the good in Christmas. AH/BxE, lemons.
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Isn't that the BEST?! Seriously, thank you so much! There were so many little phrases that really punctuated the story for me.
The exhausted sigh of the bus - From the first sentence, you truly set the scene and tone.
He slid his briefcase into the first empty seat and folded his gangly body in after it - Whenever I think of Edward, I always picture him larger than life. The thought of him human and lonely and longing...this one little bit just really gives me a picture of his mundane existence. Does that sound weird ( ... )
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And following you was fun! hehe
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