Gift for Demosthenes91!

Feb 21, 2010 10:17

Back of My Head
Recipient: Demosthenes91
Rating: M
Warnings: There is a lemon, if that needs warning...
Summary: Edward will be alone again these holidays. Unless a fellow bus passenger can help him see the good in Christmas. AH/BxE, lemons.


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septentrion1970 February 21 2010, 16:47:00 UTC
Very cute and fluffy.

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lasmke February 21 2010, 18:42:01 UTC
Really fun story. I'm going to go and imagine they spend every day together! Sigh.

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istandcorrectd February 21 2010, 22:28:14 UTC
Edward was so shy and lovable : ) nice piece.

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demosthenes91 February 22 2010, 02:36:08 UTC
These characters did not want to shut up until their story was told.

Isn't that the BEST?! Seriously, thank you so much! There were so many little phrases that really punctuated the story for me.

The exhausted sigh of the bus - From the first sentence, you truly set the scene and tone.

He slid his briefcase into the first empty seat and folded his gangly body in after it - Whenever I think of Edward, I always picture him larger than life. The thought of him human and lonely and longing...this one little bit just really gives me a picture of his mundane existence. Does that sound weird ( ... )

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demosthenes91 February 28 2010, 08:03:33 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so happy you like it :):):)

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demosthenes91 February 28 2010, 08:04:31 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so, so, so happy you like it :):):)
And following you was fun! hehe

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ginny_weasley31 February 24 2010, 02:53:22 UTC
Oh, cute! I really love geeky Edwards. :)

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