all i ever wanted -chapter one

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notes:this is my first fic and remember I'm portuguese.i really don't know how to post it.so I just did this.this is the best my imagination can give you .i already started thinking on more chapters because I know that this cant stay here. in the end if you don't like it say please tell me what to change .if you do like it comment pleasee!!

oh and

Comments

[unending_light]

Awww I liked it :D And the house looks great! Have you written in portuguese? If so, i'd like to read it!

BTW, if you need help let me know!

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Hey thanks I'm really happy...
I didn't wrote it in portuguese but I can have it in no time
And I do need help every story i read are posted differently I cant do better than this and I'm new at this site and don't know it very well so if you could help me with something i would really appreciate

thank again for the comment

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by the way I really loved your story

great job

[unending_light]

Thehe Thanks a bunch :D