Falling Down & Other Accidents: Part Two

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Comments

[lasmke]

Yeah, as far as first times go... that was hot.

[lasmke]

Really? Thank you. I have actually always been a little intimidated by writing a first time lemon, so happy it wasn't crap.

[sleepyvalentina]

ahh...so sad at the end.

[sleepyvalentina]

I prolly should have found a way to end it here. Hell, ending it exactly as it was would have likely caused less lashing out...not that there was much, but my own tendency towards self-flagellation doesn't helping the sitch. Sorry again.

[sleepyvalentina]

Don't be sorry.

[belli486]

The only comment I have for your story at this point is a quote I used in my story Trust, Loyalty, Commitment: “Much unhappiness has come into the world because of bewilderment and things left unsaid.”
-Fyodor Dostoyevsky

Edward and Bella is this story kill me. They communicated intimately, and with their hearts, but not audibly so there wouldn't be any misunderstanding of intentions.

Bev

[b3j02]

I am so sad for them. They obviously have some really deep feelings for each other but are too stubborn to go admit and submit to them.