[tenkuu no escaflowne] Beginnings

[twilight_aria]

Title: Beginnings
Series: Tenkuu no Escaflowne
Word Count: 777
Rating: G
Author's Notes: Post-series fic, so spoilers are likely. This is possibly the beginning of a series which will eventually include a plot, but for now, I am stuck in drabble-mode I think.

Comments

[mini_nuisance]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!! you're a great writer and I love your descriptions!!!!

[wiredclover]

D'awwwwww. Very cute. Two quibbly points:

This is this foundation.
I think it would flow better if it was "the foundation" instead of "this".

In my humble opinion, I think the last line is a bit cliche...it doesn't seem to flow well with the rest of the language you have going. But still, great job!

[twilight_aria]

Thank you, I tried to edit it but I missed that line twice.

And I've tweaked the last line a bit, let me know what you think. I think I just wanted it to be 775 words. Although now it's 777. XD;

Edited because it is late and apparently I can no longer spell. >_>;

[m1noru]

I love your writings. ^o^ I think they're really sweet and you always manage to build the right atmosphere. :DD Keep up the good work! ♥

[silverkuja]

Short but sweet! I like the idea of the two preparing to meet simultaneously even though they are on different worlds. ^_^

[f_ireworks]

Very nice. You've worked around the issue of Hitomi leaving her family beautifully. I really liked this piece :-)