#22 Taking Flight [Short Drabbles on Jae]

Mar 07, 2007 23:21

Title: Taking Flight [Short Drabbles on Jae]Pairing: Jae x Min, Chun, Su & Yunho ( Read more... )

jaejoong x dongbanshinki, fanfic

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yueshi March 7 2007, 15:45:52 UTC
like the jaesu and jaeho ones the most, but all of them a really good.

but I followed a like you left.. I think it was the hug comm... and there is a mistake, for you have a http/ between the actual http:// and the link... was kinda confusing and took me a while to figure that out laugh!

Oh, and by the way: I'm a friend of ridhanna *laugh* and I'm in beijing right now as well. so we may meet, nay? ^^

*goes and spread some more dbsk love*

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twilight_ave March 7 2007, 15:59:48 UTC
wow your really fast!^^ I just realized there was something wrong with the link right after I posted it and had run off to fix it and came back to find your msg hehe^^

yes, we'll definitely meet and fangirl and fangirl and .. uhhmmm.. fangirl lol XD

glad you liked the fic!

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rhidana March 7 2007, 17:07:45 UTC
Wah, yueshi was faster than me! But my internet is soooooooo slow at the moment =_=
And you both wrote my name wrong, it's only one 'n' :P

But to get to the point XD
Loved it!!! (don't you grow boring of that? *lol*) JaeChun! *__* That's a pairing that simply can't go without a decent portion of angst, at least that's it for me, dunno why ^^ JaeSu was love as well! Actually, I loved them all *sighs contentedly* Every one a different aspect of relationship, that was really really nice! =)
I recently developed a serious obsession for YooMin, don't know why, but these two are just too cute together XD If I had just a little of your talent, I would try to write something, but I guess I just keep on writing comments and spamming your journal when I actually should be sleeping XD
And I still haven't found my books *grml* So I guess I have to buy new ones *again* tomorrow....

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yueshi March 8 2007, 02:06:58 UTC
I only copied the name, because I never know how to write it :P

and damn it, because of your books... you could really thrown them away >_

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bellasurus March 7 2007, 15:59:14 UTC
I adored this *_* Fluffy and warm like a cup of...hot chocolate XDDDD. Adored JaeHo's especially...because it rounded up the drabbles nicely, even if they weren't meant to be linked. JaeSu's was pretty too, weakness in Su showing despite his attempt to become more smexy and less cute, stronger and less emotional. Can only do that to the band umma. Heh!

Thank you for sharing these ^__^

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twilight_ave March 7 2007, 16:28:55 UTC
glad you liked it^^

I actually had a hard time writing down JaeHo since I never think I can write JaeHo and Su's well.. none of can really deny how he's getting smexier and smexier by the minute and still get teased by eveyone XD

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rebelyon5anghel March 7 2007, 16:13:04 UTC
Wow. I loved all of them :D.

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twilight_ave March 7 2007, 16:30:05 UTC
yey!! XD

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audient March 7 2007, 21:45:45 UTC
I think...

I love JaeSu and JaeChun one the most :3 ...but JaeChun was good too D: and JaeHo had killer lines.

...actually. See. What amazed me most is that you managed to convey so much with a sentence. 1 for Min, 3 for Chun, 6 for Su, and another 3 for Ho. They're... beautiful :3 I think I'm memorizing this. ♥

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twilight_ave March 8 2007, 06:01:16 UTC
Thanks!!^^ They're all actually pretty short bcoz I was feeling crappy about the way I wrote/write when the inspiration struck and my muse wouldn't leave me hehe^^

'I love JaeSu and JaeChun one the most :3 ...but JaeChun was good too D: and JaeHo had killer lines.' - Did you mean JaeMin on one of these?^^

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audient March 8 2007, 06:03:05 UTC
...THE SECOND JAECHUN WAS JAEMIN.

This only served to prove that your drabble was so good it messed with my brain :|

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twilight_ave March 8 2007, 06:10:27 UTC
i have served my purpose then lol XD

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7x18 March 8 2007, 00:02:13 UTC
Kudos on being able to portray five amazing scenes with your 'drabbles'. I'm sorry that I wouldn't be able to give you a definite favorite (aside from jaeho yongwonhi! <- please ignore) among your pieces - because each and every one of them so beautifully portrayed how these 'pairings' could BE. And I couldn't put it any better than that >_<

But now I'm quite looking forward to full literary pieces from you. Therefore, congratulations, I am now your official stalker.

~_~ Good job. More please.

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twilight_ave March 8 2007, 06:05:12 UTC
haha XD Thanks!! ^_^

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