#26 The Taste of Snow

[twilight_ave]

Title: The Taste of SnowAuthor: twilight_ave

Comments

[celia_ac]

Oh wow. I really liked this. And I'm also curious about the rascism you talk about in the story-this was really good, I found myself tearing up a little. Great one-shot.

Friended you.

[twilight_ave]

friended you back^^

It's very vague but i remember that he's a Male DJ in Korea who said a couple of mean things about Jae, Heechul (i think) and this more flamboyant korean star (the 1 who cross-dressed and danced in front of the boys in the MKMF award). I can't find it anymore but i know i read it in one of the dbsk-related lj comms. Totally pisses me off that he gets away with it.

I'm (really) happy that you like it^_^

[shinme]

Wow, this story really touched me.. It got me all emotional and teary-eyed *sniff*. It was so beautiful and bittersweet, just like how jaeho is for me. Wonderfully written! *saves*

[twilight_ave]

Thanks!!^^

Beautiful and bittersweet was definitely what i was aiming for^^

[7x18]

saves spot!=)

[rhidana]

That simply was beautiful! I loved the little fluff in between all the angsty stuff. That was exactly how I imagine JaeHo! Poor Yunho though^^

[twilight_ave]

I should treat Yunho better in my fics^^ But if you squint(really hard)you'll see that I was really trying to send out that Jae was just as much in love with him that he'll be willing to walk away just so Yunho doesn't get hurt.

[rhidana]

Yep, I saw that ^^
Jae willing to sacrifice his love just to keep Yunho from getting hurt just makes it all the more bitter, that's why - poor Yunho XD

[ai_fantasy9]

absolutely beautiful. i love the wordings and how everything is placed together. and most importantly, i love the closing:

[[[
What does it matter that you’re both guys?

That neither of you would make the ideal daughter-in-law.

That it’s wrong in all the ways it’s not wrong at all when he leans into you and falls asleep in your arms.

“This is real for as long as you want it to be.”

When he’s the only reality you want.
]]]]

[twilight_ave]

Thanks!! The last part was the hardest one for me to write out so you made me really happy with this^^