#27 It's All Gone Wrong, A Wedding (2/2)

[twilight_ave]

Title: It's All Gone Wrong, A Wedding (2/2)
Author: twilight_ave
Pairing: Jae x Yunho
Rating & Genre: PG / Angst, Drama.. and then it all just realy boils down to Romance don't you agree?^^
Summary: Based on the plotbunnie offered by whitefoxburns which led to the fic "Wedding" I posted some months ago, link:http://twilight-ave.livejournal.com/5161.html#cutid1

Comments

[fantasylove4ev]

okay i totally don't get what happened at the end ...

[greenbean1001]

Can i give a guess? I guess the sister is going to give up yunho and tell him to take care of Jae? The sister is slowly dying of some illness?

[twilight_ave]

hehe yup you guessed right on all accounts^^; It all ended up being kinda clichey-ish but well... I couldn't seem to write it out differently^^ Partly because I'm in love with Jae's little sister and I can't imagine her being a bitch ^-^

[imeak0]

yeah... i agree.. i'm utterly c0nfused!

[wmelon_kaiye]

Aish, cliche or not, that was really well written~

Thanks <3

[twilight_ave]

thanks!! ^-^

[enchanted1312]

omg, it was a happy ending right? i so wanted to hug her for giving jaeho a second chance that they totally deserved. this fic caught me off-guard, making me gasping for air when it was all over. i loved it! *hugs*

[twilight_ave]

Thanks!!^^ It's definitely a happy ending.. or a bittersweet one at the least^^

[erinastrid]

oh my...
this clenched my heart just as tight as the first one did..

*sigh*

was i right in thinking that jae's sister would 'pass on' soon?
i mean there was the part there where she was described as 'pale' and jae even said that she wouldn't have forever, didn't he?

sigh..i don't understand what i'm feeling right now..
it's like i feel, warm and cold inside all at once..
i hope i had someone to hug me right now...*wipe tear*

this was beautiful..
thank you.
do write more, neh..?
~<3333333

[twilight_ave]

Is it too late for me to hug you now? ^^;; <3

I'm sorry and (*guilty) glad about the mixed feelings .. lol^^ I wanted it to be bittersweet^^ ♥

Oh and you got it down right! I totally smiled at how you got the hints^-^

Glad you loved it!!

[audient]

Ah-- well.

That was good ♥

My favorite part is the italics, I guess. I also love how you incorporated the other members' views on this and the way you write it from YunHo's...

...it was beautiful :3

[twilight_ave]

Thanks!!!^^ <3333