Re: VOTE FEEDBACKmistressmarilynOctober 18 2010, 05:13:55 UTC
Yours was my choice for best story, so you'll get my feedback in a private post. But I'll say here, as well, that I loved your story. First, I loved that you crossed Twilight with a contemporary, popular fandom. Go you! And I love a good songfic. I thought Kelly Clarkson's Breakaway was the perfect autobiographical ballad for Nessie.
I also liked Nessie's POV here. It was interesting and believable. And I thought the story was perfectly constructed, starting with the curtain parting and ending with the bow, giving us all the backstory in between.
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I also liked Nessie's POV here. It was interesting and believable. And I thought the story was perfectly constructed, starting with the curtain parting and ending with the bow, giving us all the backstory in between.
Thanks for taking a chance with this crossover.
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I also voted for your story. I thought it was so creative and worked so well.
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