Re: VOTE FEEDBACKscribbled_messSeptember 20 2010, 11:43:39 UTC
congratulations!
I rly liked your entry. I liked the way reality and dreams merged and you weren't quite sure what was real to Alice and what was just a dream. I liked Carlisle coming in at the end to change her and Alice's realisation. The ending line was perfect.
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I rly liked your entry. I liked the way reality and dreams merged and you weren't quite sure what was real to Alice and what was just a dream. I liked Carlisle coming in at the end to change her and Alice's realisation. The ending line was perfect.
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I won't bite, I promise (unless you want me too ;) )
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There's a story in which my eyes shut (is it late enough?)
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