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Round 1 // Challenge 4 - RESULTS

Oct 03, 2010 21:02

.... and here are the results!

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!results, !round: #1, !round one - challenge 4

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QUESTIONS? needtakehave October 4 2010, 01:03:08 UTC

QUESTIONS?

VOTE FEEDBACK needtakehave October 4 2010, 01:03:21 UTC

VOTE FEEDBACK

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Re: VOTE FEEDBACK mistressmarilyn October 4 2010, 07:17:31 UTC

I *loved* this story, by the way. What a fantastic twist of reason for Edward to realize things would have been easier had Bella been a girl. Very, very clever.

One thing I'd pont out is the use of "laying" in the first line is incorrect. This is one of the trickiest words in the English language to use correctly. In this case, it should be "lying."

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK onetraveller October 4 2010, 20:21:41 UTC

Ohhh! I loved your story - it was such a chilling ending when Edward realized it would have been easier and better as a boy and Bella has NO clue. It was great!

Thread 13

chamilet October 4 2010, 03:04:49 UTC

I'd like feedback on the drabble Delusion, please.

mistressmarilyn October 4 2010, 06:51:41 UTC

I liked Delusion very much. I think it's fantastic when an author can tell a story in 100 words, and this was a good example of both good use of the prompt and efficient use of every single word.

chamilet October 4 2010, 14:38:20 UTC

Thank you so much!