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A Mess You Could Sell by Ladyinblue6

Jan 05, 2011 00:15

LJ name:ladyinblue6
Title: A Mess You Could Sell
Rating: M
Pairing(s): Emmett and Bella
Other Characters: Rosalie, Edward, Alice, and Jasper
Summary: Bella’s always had a big crush on Emmett Cullen, Alice and Edward’s older brother. With a little help from Edward, her gay best friend, and Alice, her go-to girl for fashion, Bella devises a plan on how to win ( Read more... )

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Comments 9

anonymous January 6 2011, 04:20:40 UTC

Could I just say that Bella acted like many teenage girls who like boys act? Myself included.

yenny2206 January 8 2011, 01:20:45 UTC

Thanks for commenting it means alot to the writer and to us.

yenny2206 January 7 2011, 03:49:41 UTC

You know I agree with what the reviewer before said,about Bella acting like many of us acted when we were first in love with a boy, the crush, the having an asthma attack for trying to do what they did (in my case baseball), the heartache, the boy that doesnt notice you like him and always like someone else, who see you like a friend instead of something else. I think must of us would agree with that. I love it and you did such a wonderful story, with humor, romance, real life feelings.

Thanks soo much for participating.

♥

anonymous January 7 2011, 05:03:37 UTC

I liked Bella and for me that is hard to say since I really can't stand her but you made her likeable and something readers can relate to. My favorite character, well Edward of course.

yenny2206 January 8 2011, 01:20:54 UTC

Thanks for commenting it means alot to the writer and to us.

anonymous January 8 2011, 19:29:18 UTC

First time I read this pairing. Now I'm looking for more story with this pair thanks to you.

Wonderful story and realistic as well.

anonymous January 10 2011, 15:54:41 UTC

Could Emmett be more dense? Lol