Firefly in Summer by Primarycolors

[yenny2206]

Name: primarycolors
Title: Firefly in Summer
Rating: M
Pairing(s): Edward/Bella
Genre: Romance/Angst
Summary: Edward finds himself back in the little beach town of his childhood when he inherits the local bar from his uncle. The beautiful girl next door has killer legs, a sketchbook and secrets that are slowly eating her alive. What will Edward

Comments

[anonymous]

OMG I like LOVE this story. But why must you end it there I want more. I want Edward to get his Bella.

[yenny2206]

Thanks for commenting it means alot to us.

[yenny2206]

I know I told you this but this story made me cry. I love the hope at the end of he maybe changing time and getting Bella and perhaps stopping a few other tragedies along the way.

[anonymous]

You really know your characters in this story, their feelings, thoughts and I just adore you for it. Must often I have read stories where the author doesnt really know her characters and therefore contradicts them within the story. I adore this story.

[yenny2206]

Thanks for commenting it means alot to the writer and to us.

[anonymous]

Thank you guys so much! I know I left it in a bit of a cliffhanger but I'm working hard on the sequel. I knew from the beginning where Edward would end up and what he would do with his opportunity. I appreciate everyone reading and letting me know what they think. As a first time writer, getting feedback is like opening an unexpected present! I'm primarycolors over on ff.net - if you are interested in the sequel. You guys are awesome!

Yen, thanks for everything, darlin'. :)

[anonymous]

Thank you soo much for a wonderful, emotion filled story. I'm not a fan of Bella, but I felt for her and even liked her. I will have you on my favorite on ff.net.