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yenny2206 in twilightbigbang

Solar Flare by Avashida

Jan 19, 2011 18:38

LJ name: avashida
Title: Solar Flare
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Jacob/Edward, all canon pairings, implied Alec/Jane.
Other Characters: Bella, Alice, Carlisle, Esme, Marcus.
Summary: It’s Jacob instead of Bella who goes to Volterra to save Edward. And it’s Bella, not Victoria, who brings the newborn army.
Warnings: Slash, angst, character death.
Word Count: ( Read more... )

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Comments 22

anonymous January 22 2011, 01:37:37 UTC

A great, unique story. Jacob imprinting on Edward via a picture, what a wonderful and well unique idea. You manage to put a twist in the imprinting story and for that I am thankful. I hope to read more of your stories.

avashida January 29 2011, 19:13:31 UTC

Thank you so much for commenting! I have ideas for a sequel but we'll have to see. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

seamonkeyz27 January 22 2011, 03:56:59 UTC

This is now in my top 5 favorite Jakeward Fics ever written. Your character voices are perfect... really just...right. I loved the storyline...the angst...the hurt... The love. Just really...perfect.

yenny2206 January 29 2011, 03:58:04 UTC

The author did such a great job with this story. Thanks for commenting :)

avashida January 29 2011, 19:15:01 UTC

I'm genuinely honoured that you enjoyed it so much. Thank you for the comment about voices; my beta and I worked very hard to keep everyone as in-character as possible.

Thank you so much for commenting <3

Samson anonymous January 25 2011, 00:46:30 UTC

Amazing, amazing, amazing. Absolutely loved it. Loved your dominant Jacob. Bravo Loved everything about it

Re: Samson avashida January 29 2011, 19:15:33 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it - thank you so much for commenting!

anonymous January 29 2011, 03:57:28 UTC

I need to read more!

avashida January 29 2011, 19:16:27 UTC

I take that as a great compliment XD I have ideas for a sequel - we'll have to see. It depends on whether there's another big bang this summer.

avari_maethor February 1 2011, 19:57:57 UTC

Yeah... so wasn't expecting the wolf who died to die... so it hit me like an intense punch to the gut. It saddens me, but I'm also so glad you did it. I always thought that everyone making it out of the battle but the newborns was a little... to happily ever after y'know?

And I'd be lying if I said I couldn't believe it. Because I've killed him more times than we'll count :P

Anyway! Marvelous story. I'd be lying if I said this was slash canon because that's starry_nights88's Imprinting series. But this is pretty damn close. It was written really well, noticed a couple of typos but nothing major, and quite a few parts kept me on the edge of my seat.

I look forward to seeing what you write in the future. I'm sure it'll be awesome.