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Hallowed Moon by herumtreiber

Oct 01, 2011 08:49

Author: herumtreiber
Title: Hallowed Moon
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Edward/Jacob
Other Characters: Alice, Carlisle, Bella, Jasper, Emmett, Rosalie, Billy Black, Embry, Quil, Seth, Aro, Caius, Marcus, Jane, Alec, Demetri
Summary: Alice has a strange vision. Watching it, Edward's feelings about Jacob surface. Is Carlisle's interpretation the correct one? Jacob and ( Read more... )

Comments 14

yenny2206 October 1 2011, 14:11:31 UTC

Wanted to be teh first to comment and thank you for being part of this year BigBang, it has been a pleasure having you. And thanks for writing about my boys.

Will be back for more later

herumtreiber October 1 2011, 14:24:21 UTC

Thank you for your unfailing support and kindness!

anonymous October 1 2011, 20:31:31 UTC

I am a Edward/Bella fan but I read the summary of this and thought I could browse through it. One hour later here I am commenting. The description of the story made it seem real to me and got me thinking about this pairing. It was well written I like it.

herumtreiber October 1 2011, 20:55:45 UTC

Thank you very much! I appreciate it coming from an Edward/Bella fan.

I think there's possibility in the E/J pairing. There's a lot of backstory to Edward we don't know very much about :)

ext_801272 October 1 2011, 22:53:13 UTC

I've always wanted to read a fic written by you since I read your haikus and drabbles ^^
*goes off to read*

herumtreiber October 1 2011, 23:02:08 UTC

Thanks! I hope you enjoy it. I had fun researching the information :)

yenny2206 October 4 2011, 05:24:09 UTC

Excuse my ramblings...I adore how this started. The relationship of Alice and Edward, the easy, respectful caring relationship between Edward and Carlisle. Edward, who I think is his own enemy, emotions regarding what he feels or should feel. Carlisle thoughts on Alice vision was intresting and unique. You seemed to have a soft spot for Jane :). Jacobs car name, wonderful.

herumtreiber October 4 2011, 12:23:55 UTC

I think Carlisle's empathy makes him a great father, and Edward seems to be unaware of his true qualities.

Carlisle would be aware of many forgotten facts that color his thoughts.

I like the Volturi but especially Jane. And Jake likes his car :)

Thank you very much!

hotfortwins October 5 2011, 05:35:02 UTC

OMG. Well.... That was awesome. An amazing take on it. It confused me to start with, but as we got given more and more information everything clicked - which is amazing, as I'm assuming you wanted the readers to get a glimpse of how confused everyone was with what was happening.

I love that Edward and Jacob complete each other; and that the Pack and the Coven become one. I do love happy endings.

I wish I'd written up notes as I went, but I didn't.. so I'm just going to say that this was awesome. I loved it and I look forward to reading more reviews as they come through for you. :-)

Tori xx

herumtreiber October 5 2011, 13:14:10 UTC

Thank you!

I wanted the readers to find out the truth slowly, to embark on a journey similar to theirs.

They work in a team. Edward and Jake fit, their abilities complement each other. But they couldn't do it alone, they needed the support of their families and friends.

I do love happy endings too. It was fun writing the last scenes.

I tried to write an ending fitting for their story.

Thank you very much for your review!!