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Actions and Consequences by Moosical

Oct 01, 2011 22:09

Author: Moosical
Title: Actions and Consequences
Rating: PG-13
Pairing(s): Edward/Bella, Jacob/Leah and other canon pairings
Other Characters: Dr Death (Frank Peters), Adam (Nomad)
Summary: After the fateful party in new moon Edward flees, expecting his family to do the same. He cuts off all contact. Two years later he's back and he finds Bella, still ( Read more... )

Comments 9

yenny2206 October 1 2011, 22:32:26 UTC

I have to be the first to comment. Thank you soo much for participating and helping me out so much. Your friendship is one I cherish dearly. You were the first person who welcome me here and 'til this day you are here helping me. Thanks bb!

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moosical October 1 2011, 23:23:55 UTC

You are a dear friend to me too hon.

It has been a pleasure taking part. I enjoyed writing my story and loved doing the fanmixes ;) If they give the listeners anywhere near the pleasure that I had in choosing the tracks, that would be great ;)

Moo
-x-

Alisha D. anonymous October 2 2011, 21:13:41 UTC

This story was a nice twist to an everyday Edward/Bella story.90% of the stories I read it focuses on Bella and while this story have her POV is about Edward. I started reading the story this morning and had a hard time putting it down, I haven't done anything around the house. It was excellent, well written, and very interesting.

Re: Alisha D. moosical October 4 2011, 10:56:07 UTC

Thank you for the kind comments, I am pleased that you enjoyed it ;)

hotfortwins October 3 2011, 02:52:25 UTC

Well, as I mentioned to you on GT, I'm going to ask you to excuse me from reading this through again... However, I would like to let it be known that I loved beta'ing this story for you. RL got in my way, but I loved your concept, and it was one that I've never come across before (in any verse). Which was a joy for me to read over and over again.

Thank you for making my job an easy one - even if it was a daunting task to be given a 100 piece long file ;-). Hehe. <3

moosical October 4 2011, 10:59:13 UTC

Thanks so much for all that you did ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if you did have to read it a load of times ;)

I like to try different angles.

ADF Reviewer anonymous October 4 2011, 02:31:35 UTC

I think you have created a story that was really vivid,almost like watching a movie. I wanted to foward to the end and see how it was going to end, but has to hold myself. Really nicely done.

Re: ADF Reviewer moosical October 4 2011, 11:25:59 UTC

Many thanks for the lovely comments. I am glad that you enjoyed it. I really enjoyed writing it ;)

yenny2206 October 9 2011, 20:31:59 UTC

So it seems that almost everyone said what I wanted about this story but,

I loved it! you made me like Bella Edward was amazing, The things we go and do for love is always nice and bittersweet to read about. But this story was original and intresting from the beginning. And I agree with teh comment belowe/above that the imagery was like watchimg a ovie. I wanted to skip to the end (and I did but it didnt make sense)so I had to pace myself to read it and was ohh, well that make sense.

yOu are briiliant but you already knew that :)