Cancer

Aug 04, 2009 09:42

It started with a cough.

No one saw it coming. Then one day Robert's chest heaved, and he stared down in horror at the smattering of blood on his hand. blood from his lungs. Only She knew at first, his devil and angel combined.
She stood by him through the painful tests, and waited for the news.
  The doctor looked at him with a mournful expression ( Read more... )

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xx_doir_xx August 4 2009, 18:16:32 UTC
aww noooo me dont like dieing pattz! :( but twas good!

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cptlbryant August 4 2009, 20:19:32 UTC
This was SO sad! Really good, though.

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twilighter1991 August 5 2009, 04:19:31 UTC
thnx

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makita94 August 4 2009, 20:41:18 UTC
Sooo good but oh man really sad

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twilighter1991 August 5 2009, 04:19:58 UTC
I know, I cried, too

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yes1990 August 4 2009, 20:42:32 UTC
Dude, y r u doin' this 2 me! I cant stop crying. It was so sad. I know its just fic bt i hope n pray he doesnt die lyk that :-(
i wish they could both stop smoking

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twilighter1991 August 5 2009, 04:20:29 UTC
srry to bum your day, lol

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graygale August 4 2009, 21:08:25 UTC
This seriously left me really, really sad.

Especially, that last part of this...

'Because, the Hardest part of this is leaving you...'

Really, really sad, indeed.

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twilighter1991 August 9 2009, 15:14:27 UTC
I know...:( I hate the things my brain creates sometimes

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jordan_alexa August 5 2009, 00:08:08 UTC
This was soooo amazing. Extremely sad and heartbreaking, but it was so full of emotion. Great work.

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twilighter1991 August 9 2009, 15:14:44 UTC
thank you

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