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twilightthief

We are who we are behind closed doors...

Jun 28, 2011 02:38

Pages upon pages never written.

These painted hearts of ours like millions of miles.

Charles slinks down the hall as silently and lightly as he can feeling like an intruder in his own home.

His bare feet brush antique wood and his mind strains to hear what his ears cannot.

Feeling, searching, reaching out.

All voices are quiet except for one.

We turn ( Read more... )

charles/erik, xmen first class, fan fiction

Comments 24

razzlie June 28 2011, 08:41:29 UTC

omg you did it!

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twilightthief June 28 2011, 18:33:24 UTC

*blushes*

Thank you.

I had many, MANY doubts about this...and Im still not sure if Im going to post it publically.

Thanks a lot.

oh right forgot to include this razzlie June 28 2011, 08:49:22 UTC

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Re: oh right forgot to include this twilightthief June 28 2011, 18:33:52 UTC

*grin*

Thank you

Re: oh right forgot to include this checkmatey June 28 2011, 20:41:19 UTC

iawtc

Re: oh right forgot to include this twilightthief June 28 2011, 20:48:15 UTC

*grins*

Thank you. :)

obloquy June 28 2011, 11:49:43 UTC

I can't express just how much I love your writing. Guh. ♥

twilightthief June 28 2011, 18:34:19 UTC

Oh, thank you so much dear.

The compliment means a lot.

Thanks

momocas June 28 2011, 18:44:27 UTC

OMG, I really loved this! You write so beautifully and I think you kept them perfectly in character. And the last sentences killed me for how wonderful they are!

twilightthief June 28 2011, 20:35:10 UTC

Same icon!
Score!

Thank you so much. It means a lot, thanks.

hungryhippo11 June 30 2011, 00:32:02 UTC

I haven't gotten around to seeing X-Men: FIrst Class yet, but after reading your fic...OMG, I NEED TO SEE THIS FILM YESTERDAY!

It's wonderfully rhythmic, and so visually evocative. Love this kind of writing! Even though I haven't seen what the characters are like in the film, I could easily imagine them like this...especially with said actors involved ;)

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twilightthief June 30 2011, 02:59:49 UTC

*blushes*

Oh girl...thank you! *hugs*

This comment means a lot. It means a lot that my friends read this first...now I may post it for the public.

And heh-thats the second time someone posted that gif as a comment for one of my fics *grins* I love that gif!

I really hope you see First Class soon and that you enjoy it as much as I did!