[FIC] A Million Miles (Ohno Satoshi/Sakurai Sho, PG-13, 1/1)

[twilit_tempest]

Title: A Million Miles
Group/Pairing: Ohno Satoshi x Sakurai Sho [Arashi]
Prompt: 45. Miles
Word Count: 605
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Grown adults were not supposed to feel like this and Sho’s onto his tricks.

Disclaimer: I do not know any of these people and by no means do I intend to disrespect, slander, or imply anything about them. While it’

Comments

[citlecrewolf]

Awwwwww! That was a nice Ohno/Sho story, I don't usually see this pairing. Good job, I like how it was written! At the end you have 'and all he could was wait' should it have a 'do' in after could? Thanks :)

[twilit_tempest]

Ah, thanks. I find I often miss little things like this no matter how many times I reread my own things, and I've probably reread this story almost ten times now.

Anyway, thanks very much for the comment, too, and not just pointing out my fail. ^_^

[batrisya_85]

yay for upcoming smexy~~ haha *pervert mind mode: ACTIVATED*

haha~ awww.. it's interesting because i haven't found so much of Yama pair fics, and when i read yours, it's like a new perspective :)

aww.. Riida missed Sho-chan already~ sweet love!

thanks for this~<3

[twilit_tempest]

I hope the new perspective is a good thing and not a 'I'm completely off-base on personality' thing. :/

Anyway, thanks for the comments and reading. And do look forward to upcoming smexy!

Hmm?

[chopstixchi]

Wow. That was super short. I was all settled down to read one of your "short" fics and whoa... You weren't kidding. lol.

I liked it though.

Quite sad. I look forward to the happy smuttiness.

:)

Re: Hmm?

[twilit_tempest]

Hai! Super short, isn't it?

I'm almost proud of myself.

I look forward to happy smuttiness as well.

^_^

[daffytan]

Wow.. thanks for sharing this.
I start to realize how much I miss this ShoXOhno pairing after I read your fic.
*goes to dig up the old ShoXOhno fics I saved*
XD Simple but nice. I love this.

[twilit_tempest]

I'm more than happy to spread the yama love.

::glows::

Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it more than you could ever know. ^_^

[mars_anch]

waiting for next yamapair ^0^

If you have times, writing long story, please

[twilit_tempest]

You know, I usually do write much longer stories than this, and these two yama fics might be the first time I've ever written anything this short so I expect the next ones to be longer.

Thanks for reading and commenting. Its very much appreciated.