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SHRIEK: He Tastes Like You [1/1]

Mar 29, 2008 16:37

I sat on the couch in the lobby, silently waiting like every other night. Tonight, I wasn’t in our room, pretending to be asleep as he crawled into bed smelling like someone else. I had chosen tonight to tell him that I knew. It was late, but I wasn’t tired, kept awake by my anger and betrayal, but mostly by the hurt. It hurt more than I could ( Read more... )

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mono_chr0matic March 31 2008, 04:25:29 UTC

this was so sad, but so good, and so intense....I think I'm going into shock (bad!Patrick) you did good

peachypaw March 31 2008, 19:49:43 UTC

T.T kinda sad but the end is soooooooooo unexpected....

thesleepless84 March 31 2008, 21:22:05 UTC

...Cheating!Patrick...cheating!Patrick...

I...I just can't picture it...

And I was all "yays, they are back together"

then the last sentence kinda killed that. all together.

but i loved this anyway. ♥

x_if_i_left_x April 2 2008, 00:31:25 UTC

Duuude...nobody EVER writes cheating!Patrick. But you do, and apparently you do it well. Love it.

infamousxaffair April 8 2008, 06:59:23 UTC

:( i got all happy when it looked like they were going to make up, just to have a sad ending! I dont like meancheatingontheloveofhislife!Patrick but i like the fic.