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[040] Tangled Up - Arashi (Nino/Aiba)

Sep 26, 2011 12:36

Title: Tangled Up
Group/Pairing: Arashi - Aiba/Nino, Nino/Sho, Aiba/Nino/Sho
Rating/Warnings: NC-17; boysex, angst
Word Count: 3200
Summary: It’s the third round of Mario Kart before Nino realizes how fast the scotch is working its magic as two Aibas bounce around in front of him, limbs flailing wildly. Nino thinks vaguely that that silly Masaki ( Read more... )

♪fandom :: arashi, -genre :: angst, -genre :: smut, •rating :: nc-17, #exchange :: jentfic_remix, #other :: exchange fic, ♥pairing :: sho/nino, ♥pairing :: aiba/nino, ♥pairing :: sho/nino/aiba

Comments 11

kokkaii September 26 2011, 17:54:16 UTC

Oh, I absoutely loved this! The original was brilliant, but this tied up everything so beatifully (although this one is amazing as a stand-alone as well).

I love that for Aiba and Nino, it had always been the two of them (despite the Sho factor), and that they will never admit to it either.

I like that you went back and forth between the present and the past. It gives the story more depth and a feeling of being in the moment and being introspective all at once. I love this XD

Thanks for sharing! I thoroughly enjoyed this one ^___^

jackie September 26 2011, 19:52:10 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :3

I have a major soft spot for Aiba/Nino (and, well, okay Nino/Sho is totally my OTP if we're being honest), so this was a real joy to write. :)

alexxasick September 26 2011, 21:36:45 UTC

I just love this <3

it's going straight to my memories :D

jackie September 26 2011, 23:42:17 UTC

Aww, thank you! <3 Thank you for inspiring it. :)

cry1baby September 26 2011, 22:05:25 UTC

@_@
*saves*

gosh this was so good~

jackie September 26 2011, 23:42:31 UTC

Thank you! :333333

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jackie September 26 2011, 23:42:40 UTC

Thank you for reading! :D

jellybean6972 September 27 2011, 18:38:31 UTC

I like that it's Aiba and Nino and sometimes Sho. I have a big soft spot for Aimiya, but then I also have smaller a soft spot for Sakumiya.

"but Aiba’s soul, his heart, his mouth, his eyes - they would always be Nino’s." That is just ♥

I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing :D

jackie September 27 2011, 19:10:48 UTC

Sakumiya is definitely my OTP, but I do love Aimiya a lot. <3 I just love Aiba-pairings. :3 Because everyone should love Aiba ALWAYS. XD

Thank you for reading! :)