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Shifting Colours Part 8: Manipulation and Happiness

Mar 24, 2014 19:46

Title: Shifting Colours, part 8
Author: celticlonging
Rating: pg-13
Warnings: Fifty Shades canon
Word Count: 1,268
Inspiration: gehayi and ketmakura's sporking of Fifty Shades Darker

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book: fifty shades of grey, character: other male, multi-chapter fic, rating: pg-13, genre: crossover, spitefic type: death from above, length: 1000-5000, character: christian grey

Comments 5

soraina_skye March 24 2014, 22:31:14 UTC

Oooh, cliffhanger! :D

Another god chapter! I like where you're going with this.

celticlonging March 25 2014, 18:21:58 UTC

Thank you! I'm very glad you like it.

scribal_goddess March 25 2014, 16:22:02 UTC

Okay, WTF!!!?

The fact that Christian's been manipulating Mia since she was a baby is scary... and explains her unnatural perkiness in a completely horrifying way.

celticlonging March 25 2014, 18:28:01 UTC

That was the point. It was supposed to be scary.

I hope it's OK to ask, but what do you think of the Mendozas now you've read more about them?

scribal_goddess March 25 2014, 19:05:04 UTC

I like them. And they seem to be a functional family that all have distinct personalities.